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#1 User is offline   CryingWhitch 

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  Posted 07 March 2008 - 11:53 PM

Your words are the wings which take me into the sky,
your voice lessens the pain,
when my tortured soul cries out to yours.

My heart is bleeding,
and you take it into your hands
to stop the blood from flowing,
to keep it save.

Our kindred spirits dance together
to the sound of your tender poetry.
And when your sad eyes pierce into mine
I feel your pain deep inside.

Then you rest your tired head in my lap
and I wrap my arms around you
to protect you from the evils that haunt you.

Our souls are the same,
full of sadness and tragedy.
And when the world is silent and turns all dark,
two souls are found, lying side by side.

Drained of live.
but no tears are shed anymore,
for the souls wonder on together,
hand in hand out of the misery,
into eternal love.

And when the blood runs dark and dry,
tears are all gone, all I hear is your music.
And I smile, forever cured.
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Posted 07 March 2008 - 11:58 PM

I'm really not into that kind of stuff, with all the tourtured souls, and death, and sadness and all that jazz, but I think it's really good. I love that fact that it ends happily. ^_^
so it's true, the trick is complete, become everything you said you never would be.
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Posted 07 March 2008 - 11:59 PM

View Postkeltaineniskuri, on Mar 7 2008, 11:58 PM, said:

I love that fact that it ends happily. ^_^

Yeah, me too :lol:
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Posted 08 March 2008 - 01:29 PM

View Postkeltaineniskuri, on Mar 7 2008, 11:58 PM, said:

I'm really not into that kind of stuff, with all the tourtured souls, and death, and sadness and all that jazz, but I think it's really good. I love that fact that it ends happily. ^_^


Thnx, but euhm you don't have to take the words litteraly...
It's about that you can have some serious problems and trouble some times and you can't take it no more and need a way out....
Music from bands like HIM can be that way out...

At least it is for me...I listen to their music and afterwards I feel like I can take on the world again, I can fight my problems.....It's my way out...
So in the end it's an ode to HIM...hahaha :D Ah well why should it be logical...it's art... :wink2: :sorry:
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Posted 09 March 2008 - 07:58 PM

I really liked it! And the fact you can escape from bad issues by listening music is so very true!... :victory: Same here!
...New day will dawn and I'll walk away,
From the tears and mourn in saphire haze...
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Posted 15 March 2008 - 03:04 PM

^ _ * I can live easier and longer by somebody's voice...

but I could find no way out... .because of the weakness..


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