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Sing for me darling, ‘cause my soul needs to rest
In the depth of your voice,
And my heart needs to taste
The touch of your feelings just straight from your lips,
My darling, your heart how it feels?
Sing for me sweetheart, ‘cause my eyes needs to fill
With your delicate glow,
And your beauty can kill
Any shadow of pain that is buried inside,
My darling, your eyes aren’t hide?
Sing for me deeply as only you know,
The time’s passing faster
Through us, and life goes
To the end of the road where all flowers die,
My darling, for them will you cry?
I wish in the end to carry with me
The whole being of yours, like a shine you would be,
Your eyes would enlighten my wondering ways
Your beautiful lips will murmur lost prayers
I wish to end slowly like a sweet cruelty
And closing my eyes while you’re singing for me…
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Posted 03 July 2007 - 12:32 PM
...New day will dawn and I'll walk away,
From the tears and mourn in saphire haze...
From the tears and mourn in saphire haze...
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Posted 04 July 2007 - 09:33 PM
amazing! I really love it. 
I thought things you wrote many times, but couldn't make such a poem
I thought things you wrote many times, but couldn't make such a poem
THE SUN IS BLACK
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Posted 04 July 2007 - 10:07 PM
fallen, on Jul 4 2007, 09:33 PM, said:
amazing! I really love it. I thought things you wrote many times, but couldn't make such a poem
I thought things you wrote many times, but couldn't make such a poemI'm glad you like it! I feel that way every times i listen their music! It' s divine how they can make you to have unnamed feelings, feelings that you never even thought you can have. Maybe i will post other of my poems these days.
...New day will dawn and I'll walk away,
From the tears and mourn in saphire haze...
From the tears and mourn in saphire haze...
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Posted 15 July 2007 - 06:16 PM
that was absoultely breath taking! dont ever stop writing. it brought a tear to my eyes :crying:
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Posted 25 July 2007 - 05:52 AM
thank you!
...New day will dawn and I'll walk away,
From the tears and mourn in saphire haze...
From the tears and mourn in saphire haze...
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Posted 28 July 2007 - 09:07 PM
One word
WOW?!*
nothing else to say?!*
WOW?!*
nothing else to say?!*
This post has been edited by corpsebride: 28 July 2007 - 09:08 PM
Two sided time,
Three days aside,
Your rebirth can't hurt,
Branch out behind,
The pain.
Closure has come to me, Myself,
You will never belong, To me.
Like a leach I hold on,
As if we belonged,
To some precious pure dream,
Cast off,
You see what's beneath now fail me!
Forget closure,
Three days aside,
Your rebirth can't hurt,
Branch out behind,
The pain.
Closure has come to me, Myself,
You will never belong, To me.
Like a leach I hold on,
As if we belonged,
To some precious pure dream,
Cast off,
You see what's beneath now fail me!
Forget closure,
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Posted 31 July 2007 - 11:45 AM
Beautiful .. Bravo !! I have a poem too but I wont post it because no one would care anyways but kudos to you .. 
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Posted 31 July 2007 - 08:22 PM
Thank you all!
...New day will dawn and I'll walk away,
From the tears and mourn in saphire haze...
From the tears and mourn in saphire haze...
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Posted 09 February 2008 - 01:54 AM
karinutza, on Jul 3 2007, 12:32 PM, said:
Sing for me darling, ‘cause my soul needs to rest
In the depth of your voice,
And my heart needs to taste
The touch of your feelings just straight from your lips,
My darling, your heart how it feels?
Sing for me sweetheart, ‘cause my eyes needs to fill
With your delicate glow,
And your beauty can kill
Any shadow of pain that is buried inside,
My darling, your eyes aren’t hide?
Sing for me deeply as only you know,
The time’s passing faster
Through us, and life goes
To the end of the road where all flowers die,
My darling, for them will you cry?
I wish in the end to carry with me
The whole being of yours, like a shine you would be,
Your eyes would enlighten my wondering ways
Your beautiful lips will murmur lost prayers
I wish to end slowly like a sweet cruelty
And closing my eyes while you’re singing for me…
In the depth of your voice,
And my heart needs to taste
The touch of your feelings just straight from your lips,
My darling, your heart how it feels?
Sing for me sweetheart, ‘cause my eyes needs to fill
With your delicate glow,
And your beauty can kill
Any shadow of pain that is buried inside,
My darling, your eyes aren’t hide?
Sing for me deeply as only you know,
The time’s passing faster
Through us, and life goes
To the end of the road where all flowers die,
My darling, for them will you cry?
I wish in the end to carry with me
The whole being of yours, like a shine you would be,
Your eyes would enlighten my wondering ways
Your beautiful lips will murmur lost prayers
I wish to end slowly like a sweet cruelty
And closing my eyes while you’re singing for me…
wow
thats peom has such feeling and it describes exactly how i feel for theyre muzac
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Posted 10 February 2008 - 12:14 AM
Great poem!! It is very sweet
I'd almost say it belongs in the " worst song to listen to after a breakup" thread.. but it's not a song.. but if it were, I wouldn't want to listen to it after a breakup.. I might hang myself!
Very well writen.. it truly is amazing :thumbsup:
I'd almost say it belongs in the " worst song to listen to after a breakup" thread.. but it's not a song.. but if it were, I wouldn't want to listen to it after a breakup.. I might hang myself!
Very well writen.. it truly is amazing :thumbsup:
these eyes are bleeding
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Posted 13 February 2008 - 01:58 PM
Thank you all, you're very kind.
...New day will dawn and I'll walk away,
From the tears and mourn in saphire haze...
From the tears and mourn in saphire haze...
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Posted 22 February 2008 - 05:39 PM
wow this is really good! i liked it alot!
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Posted 24 February 2008 - 01:25 PM
good job 
I feel the same but I have no slightest talent in poetry 
I feel the same but I have no slightest talent in poetry
Always stays the same,nothing ever changes...
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Posted 03 March 2008 - 04:40 PM
karinutza, on Jul 3 2007, 04:32 AM, said:
Sing for me darling, ‘cause my soul needs to rest
In the depth of your voice,
And my heart needs to taste
The touch of your feelings just straight from your lips,
My darling, your heart how it feels?
Sing for me sweetheart, ‘cause my eyes needs to fill
With your delicate glow,
And your beauty can kill
Any shadow of pain that is buried inside,
My darling, your eyes aren’t hide?
Sing for me deeply as only you know,
The time’s passing faster
Through us, and life goes
To the end of the road where all flowers die,
My darling, for them will you cry?
I wish in the end to carry with me
The whole being of yours, like a shine you would be,
Your eyes would enlighten my wondering ways
Your beautiful lips will murmur lost prayers
I wish to end slowly like a sweet cruelty
And closing my eyes while you’re singing for me…
In the depth of your voice,
And my heart needs to taste
The touch of your feelings just straight from your lips,
My darling, your heart how it feels?
Sing for me sweetheart, ‘cause my eyes needs to fill
With your delicate glow,
And your beauty can kill
Any shadow of pain that is buried inside,
My darling, your eyes aren’t hide?
Sing for me deeply as only you know,
The time’s passing faster
Through us, and life goes
To the end of the road where all flowers die,
My darling, for them will you cry?
I wish in the end to carry with me
The whole being of yours, like a shine you would be,
Your eyes would enlighten my wondering ways
Your beautiful lips will murmur lost prayers
I wish to end slowly like a sweet cruelty
And closing my eyes while you’re singing for me…
Very Nice I like this poem!!!
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